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Inspired by Save Yourself by Sense Field - used to love this song, but I've been listening to it on repeat for the whole day while writing this, and I'm kinda of sick of it now >.<
When I read through this, I couldn't help but think my god, this is so fucking boring!.. but, like I said, I have no idea what's going on with my "talent" and the moment. I cant write anything good for the life of me. Or sex scenes. I cant write them either any more *tearz*
So, it's 04:34am, and I'm just going to leave this here.. I hope you like it, and feedback would be very much appreciated, guys
When I read through this, I couldn't help but think my god, this is so fucking boring!.. but, like I said, I have no idea what's going on with my "talent" and the moment. I cant write anything good for the life of me. Or sex scenes. I cant write them either any more *tearz*
So, it's 04:34am, and I'm just going to leave this here.. I hope you like it, and feedback would be very much appreciated, guys
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Okay, gotta say I skipped most of the second half (I'm a little girly about that kid of stuff, still) but I really, really liked what I read. Are these guys characters somewhere else? It just seems like they're introduced in a way that makes it seem like we should already know them. The descriptions are excellent, and if the action feels a little rushed and dramatic, the descriptions make it still seem very real. It's good 